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Boro_Bandito:
Dude, drop the furries and draw a comic about cars, those cars, are pretty damn good cars. Also, your art style has definitely improved, but I want to remark back to what someone else said earlier about the shape of eyes. Yeah, human eyes aren't rectangles in the real world, but in a cartoon universe, eyes can be whatever you want them to be, as long as its consistent with your drawing style. Who says that a comic has to be realistic in the way its drawn, or even done in the western comic book or anime style or whatever. Look at Shlock Mercenary or hell even QC. those are very unique styles of drawing. Now, granted the artists who started those out were piss poor at drawing back in the day and their art has developed over time, and you're definitely starting ahead of that curve here, but I think you should go for something more stylized than what you're doing, maybe not absolutely Looney Tunes Cartoony or anything, especially because I like those cars so much.

Teh Geek Lord:

--- Quote from: Boro_Bandito on 18 Dec 2008, 19:14 ---Dude, drop the furries and draw a comic about cars, those cars, are pretty damn good cars. Also, your art style has definitely improved, but I want to remark back to what someone else said earlier about the shape of eyes. Yeah, human eyes aren't rectangles in the real world, but in a cartoon universe, eyes can be whatever you want them to be, as long as its consistent with your drawing style. Who says that a comic has to be realistic in the way its drawn, or even done in the western comic book or anime style or whatever. Look at Shlock Mercenary or hell even QC. those are very unique styles of drawing. Now, granted the artists who started those out were piss poor at drawing back in the day and their art has developed over time, and you're definitely starting ahead of that curve here, but I think you should go for something more stylized than what you're doing, maybe not absolutely Looney Tunes Cartoony or anything, especially because I like those cars so much.

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I'm great with cars, but coming up with an interesting plot with cars would be a daunting task, not that I wouldn't take a shot at it.   I can probably do a racing comic or something... but the entire plot and such would be from scratch, and I'm just about done with the current comic's story board... I really do like this idea you have presented.  I have my own comic that I'm trying to tie loose ends (the characters don't exactly have to be furries, I'm debating that part, but I HATE drawing human faces) and I'm working as an apprentice for a comic artist who has published works with Darkhorse Comics, and hopefully that comic we are working on will be done and published soon.  I'm sort of at a crossroads, but my art ability is getting much, much better, thanks in no small part to the members here who gave some damn good insight and crits.  Keep an eye on my DA page (in my sig) for more constant updates on what I'm doing about the comic and other ideas I'm tossing around. 

Thanks!

Jace:
A plot about cars?

Teh Geek Lord:

--- Quote from: PantsFTW on 28 Dec 2008, 08:26 ---A plot about cars?

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oh-so-epic

I already can draw the "hidden" version... haha
http://swain-slave.deviantart.com/art/Buck-s-Truck-Final-104132413

w00tang:
fuckin tight ass cars and shit. the comics, a little too wordy just make em short and sweet and not describing what i can see

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