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need advice/criticism/screams of pain (UPDATED 5/17)
Mikendher:
Thanks for the advice! Reverb is definitely the way to go I am finding.
ashley:
I like it!
I agree with the people above who said that you could use a little more force in your voice. But the rest is good!
And I also like when the vocals are on top of the vocals ("We don't care"). I like the way that sounds.
Do you have any more songs you'd be willing to share?
Also, if you change anything around in this song be sure to post the new version!
Mikendher:
Alright, I've changed quite a bit. Here's the updated version:
Michael Jermyn - Fireworks Trembling In Our Hair
Advice? Now the only part I'm uncomfortable with is the "oooh" part. Suggestions?
Slick:
I can't seem to download it, I get an error off the link. Maybe the IT desk filters it out at work here. Anyone else have trouble downloading/another way of hosting?
From the talk, yes reverb is your friend and distortion is a tricky mistress. I haven't heard it so I can't say for sure, but a lot of the people I've recorded have had problems singing too weakly/softly and wavering off key a bit; I don't know if that's what you mean by unagrassively, but make sure you can put enough volume out to keep a good note.
Hope I get to hear it!
Mikendher:
The link is working, but I've uploaded it here also, but it will be much slower (downloading from my server): Michael Jermyn - Fireworks Trembling In Our Hair
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